Professor Brown
English 1B
25 March 2013
Reflection
I actually learned a lot from both my teacher and my peer commentary. Between Mr. Brown's notes as well as Gabe's, I was able to rewrite my essay in a way that actually made more sense. I also had my friend take a look at it and get a 3rd set of comments on it. The great part of all the commentaries was that they all sort of said the same thing in a way. On my actual essay, I condensed my essay but also expanded it. I took out some parts that didn't make sense and rearranged the others to make it flow a lot easier. And for my thesis, I was able to change it up and be more direct with it. I added more quotes and incorporated them much better instead of just throwing them in there. The truth is that after reading my essay with all the commentaries in mind, I was able to see how much work was actually needed for it. They all were able to help me turn it into something I can actually say made sense. The idea of commentaries is actually really helpful and I myself benefited greatly on it.
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