Reflection #3

I feel that my rough draft of my ethical argument was one of my best written ones yet. I only received feedback from Professor Brown on my rough draft because due to a series of mishaps, I didn't have a copy of my paper in class when we did peer reviews. But even with only one set feedback, what I received helped me a lot. I was able to turn what I had into a much more structural piece. I took suggestions like "weak transition" and places where more evidence and elaboration was needed and expanded them to make much more sense. My essay had a lot of areas where meaning was suppose to be implied but Professor Brown's review helped me realize that the more I actually spell things out in my essay, the better it will be to understand. I also added more quotes to back up my examples and incorporated them a lot better instead of just throwing them in.Certain areas where rephrasing was needed were changed to flow better with the rest of the essay. Getting help from outside of ones view  is really helpful because they can let you know what the words come across saying instead of what the writer thought they were saying.